l23123j's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lineage The RYU2]

Needs work...

I like where you're going with this. But what you need to work on is detail. Most of the trees are drawn with shape tools and the backrounds are single base colours. What anime feeds off of is the detail. Your characters are mediocore at best, and they have floating arms and legs.

Not cool.

Add the rest of the arms and legs, add more detail, (like the part with the flames/charge up move) and make it run slightly smoother.
Do all of those things and you might just be on the way to front page.

The music fitted the flash well though.

Overall: 4
-Spackerchip-

Raidden responds:

i couldn’t agre more :)
Tanx for the tip's :) ill tray my best.
The only thing thet i lac is patience.
i just can't spend a week by one flash movie. Mostly i crate flash movie i one or two days :)