l23123j's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madnessjjsfnks]

Nice job...

Good Points:
I liked the fact that it was smooth and that followed Krinkels Style superbly. Especially with the elevator doors. Music fiited perfectley, and you even followed a madness style plot.

Bad points:
Slightly short. The only thing missing is speed, make the fight scenes more speedy and longer.

A bit more work and this could be great!

Overall: 6
-Spackerchip-

[Mighty Komrads Chapter 0]

Shame...

Unfortuanatly most people on this site speak english. And assholes are blindly going to blam this regardless of the content.

Good Points:
The characters worked fairly well. The voice synching was accurate and the general style of them was great.

Bad points:
Too much motion tweening, it really needed to be more sophisticated in the animation. So add more detail, especially because this is a short flash! Also, the crowd and backround noise really isn't needed, it would be funnier without it. Try to move away from the slapstick humor. And yes, it wasn't in english (Subtitles perhaps?).

Overall: 3
Average flash. Needs subtitles.

[SPIRITI-complete movie!]

Impressive.

I like your animation style regardless of it not being made in flash. Everything ran smoothly and beautifully. It was an odd character concept, and one that will obviously unravel in time.

Nice work. =)

Overall: 8
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[Lineage The RYU2]

Needs work...

I like where you're going with this. But what you need to work on is detail. Most of the trees are drawn with shape tools and the backrounds are single base colours. What anime feeds off of is the detail. Your characters are mediocore at best, and they have floating arms and legs.

Not cool.

Add the rest of the arms and legs, add more detail, (like the part with the flames/charge up move) and make it run slightly smoother.
Do all of those things and you might just be on the way to front page.

The music fitted the flash well though.

Overall: 4
-Spackerchip-

Raidden responds:

i couldn’t agre more :)
Tanx for the tip's :) ill tray my best.
The only thing thet i lac is patience.
i just can't spend a week by one flash movie. Mostly i crate flash movie i one or two days :)